Latest News Mitch McConnell returns to Senate in wheelchair to cast first vote since June Let me count: M-i-t-c-h- -M-c-C-o-n-n-e-l-l- -r-e-t-u-r-n-s- -t-o- -S-e-n-a-t-e- -i-n- -w-h-e-e-l-c-h-a-i-r- -t-o- -c-a-s-t- -f-i-r-s-t- -v-o-t-e- -s-i-n-c-e- -J-u-n-e = 67 characters. Too long. Mitch McConnell returns to Senate in wheelchair after three months Count: 61. Still over. McConnell returns to Senate in wheelchair after three months away Count: 57. Good. But need to make it more specific and include the vote detail. McConnell wheels into Senate to vote, first time since June Count: 52. Good length, has the concrete detail of the wheelchair and the vote, the timeframe since June. But place? This isn’t really a local story in the traditional sense, it’s national. The place is the Senate/Capitol. McConnell returns to Senate in wheelchair after three-month absence Count: 59. Good. Specific, different from original, captures the wheelchair detail and timeframe. Let me verify: M-c-C-o-n-n-e-l-l- -r-e-t-u-r-n-s- -t-o- -S-e-n-a-t-e- -i-n- -w-h-e-e-l-c-h-a-i-r- -a-f-t-e-r- -t-h-r-e-e—m-o-n-t-h- -a-b-s-e-n-c-e = 60. Exactly 60. McConnell returns to Senate in wheelchair after three-month absence
